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An Early Bird's Can of Worms

"For heavens sake, I thought Betty was this guy's wife until I got to the end! L H Davis has a way of drawing the reader in and then quickly flipping the switch to reveal the unexpected. This short "teaser" is like reading the inside jacket cover of a book to preview the contents only to find that someone has torn off the bottom half and you can't finish the preview! Reading this appetizer leaves me hungry for the main course."

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Fun Read!

"I enjoyed reading this story very much. It has a most interesting surprise ending that t kept me captivated all the way through to the last word. I didn't expect it would end this way and I recommend it to everyone who likes a good twist."

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An Early Bird's Can of Worms

"Hilarious. I hope the poor guy's suit wasn't too wrinkled, or his scruff TOO scruffy. He'd better take a nap later on too, and hopefully, the boss won't catch him at it--napping I mean..Wake up and smell the coffee. Oops, he already smelled it."

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