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I always find it so pleasurable to discover in a writer's ability

" I always find it so pleasurable to discover in a writer's ability to describe her character's thought processes, with such nuanced language, that whilst enhancing my understanding of the depth of the character and their motivations, also manages to allow me to gain insight into the writer herself."

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Monster’s Second Chance

"Love this story so far. Also love the interactions between Aldric and Lucy. Aldric’s reaction to his hard on is priceless. Never laughed so hard. Can’t wait to read the next chapters."

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Aldrich and Lucy

"I love that the love is already below the surface. I love the building of that awareness through the intricate weaving of words. A talented writer. Much respect. 🥰"

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Monster's second chance

"The first chapters I've read unfolds a great story and the characters: Alaric and Lucy gives me a good idea of each person Am excited for the next chapters and learn how both heals."

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Intelligent writing and I'm all for it!

"Most of my close friends. >[side note to Editor : At this point, as a reader of the Inkitt mobile app, I can only see a portion of the space reserved for readers' comments and It can't work out what is says at the foot of the comments in the colour blocked out boxes because the text is offset wrongly. I can't the feet of the letters]"

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Mated

"Real quick read fast paced with good characters and good ideas to string story together stops at chapter seven to rate but rating systems don't work so you lose rest of story"

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