What is your opinion?
I forgot
"I'm enjoying the read immensely. Solid characters, with timely conflict. Looking forward to more from this Author."
Kudos!
"First off, I want to congratulate you on getting me interested enough to read the whole book! Second, great job on the characters, particularly Bensin and Steene. You really connected me to them and I felt their highs and lows alike. Third, the story itself was engaging. I love a good sibling story, especially one with such drive. Plus, you didn't lose me in the sports portions, nor did your climax bore (I actually stayed up later than usual in order to read chapters 19-23). Keep up the good work!"
Amazing story
"I have only read the first couple chapters but decided to start a review now. I would like to say that you are a very talented writer. I was drawn in from the very beginning. The sheer emotion and tension of this piece is wonderful. I love the characters that you have provided so far -- Bensin, Ellie, Shigo, the owners, etc. I can't wait to learn more about this world that you have created. You build up our hopes with the prospect of escape and then hit us right in the chest with the plan's failure. As for the writing itself, it flows beautifully. I think that Bensin's inner dialogue fits in well and provides more to his character. Wow. Just wow. I really love this story. I hope to finish it soon. Great work."
