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Last Masterpiece

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Summary

The Last Masterpiece follows Mira, an artificial woman created piece by piece by Dr. Aris and Dr. Bellrose as their most ambitious project. Designed to be beautiful, lifelike, and extraordinary, Mira is eventually sold to a wealthy Collector and brought into the life of Julian, an artist searching for inspiration. Mira is meant to be a masterpiece herself—a perfect object to admire, possess, and inspire—but as she grows more aware of the world around her, she develops a desire no one designed her to have: she wants to create. Surrounded by people who see her as an experiment, a possession, a muse, or a miracle, Mira begins struggling with the difference between being made and truly living. Her journey becomes one of identity, autonomy, art, and ownership as she questions whether a creation can become a creator—and whether the people who built her have any right to decide what she is meant to be.

Genre
Scifi,Horror
Author
Vi
Status
1d ago
Chapters
41
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Birth

Darkness.

A switch clicks.

A laboratory appears beneath a single white light.

At its center stands an empty examination table.

DR. BELLROSE arranges instruments on a steel tray.

Each one is placed parallel to the next.

DR. ARIS stands before a chalkboard covered

in unfinished sentences.

ARIS:

What makes a masterpiece?

BELLROSE:

That is the wrong question.

ARIS:

It is the question

you brought me here to answer.

BELLROSE:

I brought you here

because you insist on answers.

BELLROSE adjusts a lamp above the table.

BELLROSE:

I need criteria.

ARIS:

For art?

BELLROSE:

For creation.

ARIS:

Those are not interchangeable.

BELLROSE:

Not yet.

ARIS turns toward the chalkboard.

Written across it:

WHAT MUST IT DO?

ARIS:

You have already decided

it must do something.

BELLROSE:

Everything does something.

ARIS:

A painting does not perform.

BELLROSE:

It produces a response.

ARIS:

That is not the same.

BELLROSE:

The body does not care

about the distinction.

He selects a clean glass vial.

BELLROSE:

The pulse quickens.

He places it on the tray.

BELLROSE:

The pupils widen.

Another vial.

BELLROSE:

The breath changes.

Another.

BELLROSE:

Attention becomes fixation.

ARIS:

You are describing symptoms.

BELLROSE:

I am describing evidence.

ARIS:

Evidence of what?

BELLROSE:

That beauty can be measured.

ARIS:

Reaction can be measured.

BELLROSE:

Good.

ARIS:

That does not explain beauty.

BELLROSE:

It explains enough

to reproduce it.

ARIS studies him.

ARIS:

You believe a masterpiece

can be engineered.

BELLROSE:

I believe anything

consistently observed

can eventually be engineered.

ARIS:

Grief?

BELLROSE:

Chemical.

ARIS:

Devotion?

BELLROSE:

Behavioral.

ARIS:

Inspiration?

BELLROSE pauses.

BELLROSE:

That is the difficult part.

ARIS:

Not mystery?

BELLROSE:

No.

ARIS:

Not genius?

BELLROSE:

No.

ARIS:

Not the soul?

BELLROSE:

Do not become theatrical.

ARIS erases the question from the board.

In its place, he writes:

WHAT MUST IT BE?

ARIS:

If it is alive,

it will possess an interior life.

BELLROSE:

Ideally.

ARIS:

Ideally?

BELLROSE:

Awareness may increase

its ability to respond

to the observer.

ARIS:

You mean adapt to them.

BELLROSE:

Yes.

ARIS:

Please do not say

“the observer”

when you mean a person.

BELLROSE:

A person observing

is still an observer.

ARIS:

And the thing being observed?

BELLROSE:

The subject.

ARIS:

Even if it can think?

BELLROSE:

Especially then.

Silence.

The machinery beneath the floor begins to hum.

ARIS:

What response do you want

the subject to produce?

BELLROSE:

Attention.

ARIS:

That is easy.

BELLROSE:

Attachment.

ARIS:

Less easy.

BELLROSE:

Admiration.

ARIS:

Temporary.

BELLROSE:

Devotion.

ARIS:

Dangerous.

BELLROSE:

Inspiration.

ARIS:

Uncontrollable.

BELLROSE:

Not if we understand its source.

ARIS:

And you believe you do?

BELLROSE:

I believe history has provided

a sufficient sample.

BELLROSE opens a large book.

Paintings. Sculptures. Anatomical sketches.

The faces change from page to page.

The bodies do not.

ARIS:

You studied the subjects

of great art.

BELLROSE:

I studied what people

consistently choose to worship.

ARIS:

Those are not the same.

BELLROSE:

Again, the body does not care

about the distinction.

He turns another page.

BELLROSE:

Softness without frailty.

Another.

BELLROSE:

Symmetry without sterility.

Another.

BELLROSE:

Intelligence without distance.

ARIS:

You mean intelligence

that does not intimidate.

BELLROSE:

I mean intelligence

that invites participation.

ARIS:

That is prettier wording.

BELLROSE:

It is also more accurate.

ARIS:

Grace.

BELLROSE:

Yes.

ARIS:

Beauty.

BELLROSE:

Obviously.

ARIS:

Tenderness.

BELLROSE:

When required.

ARIS:

Desire.

BELLROSE:

Inevitable.

ARIS closes the book.

ARIS:

You are not describing

a masterpiece.

BELLROSE:

I am describing

the conditions necessary

for one to be recognized.

ARIS:

Recognized by whom?

BELLROSE

Everyone.

ARIS:

No creation has ever been loved

by everyone.

BELLROSE:

Then not love.

ARIS:

What?

BELLROSE:

Investment.

ARIS:

Explain.

BELLROSE:

They do not need to love it.

He looks toward the empty table.

BELLROSE:

They need to feel

that it was made for them.

ARIS:

That sounds less like art

and more like manipulation.

BELLROSE:

All successful art

is manipulation.

ARIS:

And what form

will accomplish this miracle?

BELLROSE turns the lamp on.

White light floods the empty table.

BELLROSE:

One that history

has already trained them

to look at.

ARIS:

A human form.

BELLROSE:

Yes.

ARIS:

Young.

BELLROSE:

Preferably.

ARIS:

Beautiful.

BELLROSE

Necessarily.

ARIS:

Alive.

BELLROSE:

That is the achievement.

ARIS:

And male?

BELLROSE:

No.

ARIS:

Why not?

BELLROSE:

Men are permitted

to be ugly.

ARIS says nothing.

BELLROSE:

They are permitted

to be difficult.

He tightens one of the leather straps

hanging from the table.

BELLROSE:

Distant.

Another strap.

BELLROSE:

Cruel.

Another.

BELLROSE:

A man may be called brilliant

without being loved.

ARIS:

And a woman?

BELLROSE:

A woman must first

be looked at.

The humming grows louder.

ARIS:

You say that

as though you have solved it.

BELLROSE:

I have.

ARIS:

You have chosen a shape.

BELLROSE:

I have chosen

the only shape

the world already believes

can be both art

and alive.

ARIS:

And what happens

when she understands

why you made her?

BELLROSE places both hands

on the empty table.

BELLROSE:

Then we will know

whether understanding

improves the result.

Blackout.

In the darkness, a machine begins

the slow work of making a woman.

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