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Realistic.

"I had a bad home life, too."

Interesting beginning

"This is an interesting story and a good beginning. Keep writing :-)"

After The Hurricane

"I really enjoyed the unique, constant character voice, the nice family bond, and the general idea of the story. I also loved the characterisation of the Mum and Dad and the way you grounded the reader successfully. My only critique: review the few grammar mistakes. EG: mama and papa should always be capital when used as names, and number should be in written form. Also, the end of the chapter didn't seem well rounded off. Apart from that, it was a fun read I really enjoyed!"

Good so far

"A story about a hurricane and how it affects people is pretty relevant today considering the hurricane that hit Puerto Rico recently, I assume this is inspired by that event? Whether it is or isn't the plot sounds interesting, just be careful with some of the grammar and how you explain things because you do some "telling" instead of "showing" especially with the main charecter's feelings, he says that he's scared a few times but you need to show how. For example he could say "my heart was beating so fast that I swore it was going to collapse as the wind kept howling and the rain kept pounding" something like that so that the readers can feel the tension as well."