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I like your story!

" I already wrote something around page three hundred, but it seems the app requires a separate comment for the review. I like it because I can see that you take your characters seriously. It’s well written. I’ll be finishing it soon. I don’t regret adding it to my reading list. 😊"

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Respect and loyalty always on the line!

"The slight ebb and flow of events, action, battles and loss make for an awesome reading experience. And makes the reader look for more! I’m really enjoying this story!"

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"A good book with some interesting plot twists. Definitely a good read and worth the time."

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"I couldn't put it down, the characters were spot on and everything that the went through kept my heart pounding. I could have been happy without Beth's death at the end. "

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"Brilliantly written and a great captivating story as well."

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"Fantastic!!! Suspenseful, surprise after surprise. The story is fully engaging. Waking up after 30 years without any realization that the time has passed? Frightening! I cannot say enough wonderful things about this story! "

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Truelly thrilled

"One of the first books i have read and it is very interesting, thrilled and fast pace. This great book also provide education through the characters roles. Some of the chapters I have found quute disturbing for your people, but overall very good!!"

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A worthy successor to Arthur C Clarke's Childnood's End

"One of the best Science Fiction stories about the future of humanity and our relationship with the Cosmos"

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"The story is sound and enjoyable. Author should continue writing and I look forward to reading more stories by this person."

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Novel concepts, good read

"Good story, like the clever plot twists and original concept 😁"

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Progeny

"This story captivated me. I could not stop thinking of this world. I have shared the ideas of this story to many of my friends and they can't wait to read it! The author brought me to this well thought out world that was so familiar but so drastically changed. You see the darkness in humanity and you see the greatness we are capable of. It was a pleasure to read."

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Great story

"A real page Turner with plots of unforseen twist and turns. Well done. "

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Best storry

"Really catching story just can not stop reading. Best story I reacently read."

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Progeny

"I greatly enjoyed this story. You have a gift!"

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Happy reader

"I am enjoying the story. "

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A really good story. Original and well written. The characters were interesting.

"Really good story. Original and well developed. The characters were interesting. This writing and grammar was smooth. The story and characters weren't predictable cliques."

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Progeny

"The plot was well told, the turns where good not always where you thought they would be. A good story that kept you captive "

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Wonderful!

"This author has done a splendid job in making this book an exciting page turner. The only thing that I would say is that there is a LOT of language. I understand that this is a rough dystopian society, but it is slightly off putting, especially to younger readers"

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"Beautiful ❤️ "

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"Great concept. Kept my interest. Suspenseful. "

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