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Echoes Of The Gilded Chain

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Summary

After Lola lost her dad...Thing never remained they same. Her mom moved on rather quickly and with her questionably awful taste in men and Lola's stepdad was anything but good and the constant harassment was driving Lola to a corner. Soon she discovers that her life holds more secrets that what meets the eye, so what do you think? Will she find worlds perhaps secrets that's been kept under curtains or will her life be forever under Gilded chains?

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8h ago
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

“Lola, darling. Giving your dad the cold shoulder?”

The rain clattered softly on the roof, settling into a rhythm that eased my nerves. Outside, a heavy blanket of deep gray smothered the sky, while distant car horns blared against the downpour.

Dad sighed as I continued to ignore him. My gaze remained fixed on the yard, watching the rain mercilessly batter the little patch of beans I’d spent all morning planting.

“Okay, fine—maybe this will cheer you up.”

He threw his hands up in mock desperation, rummaging dramatically through his pockets with a cheeky grin. Curious despite myself, I turned toward him just in time to see him proudly present… absolutely nothing.

“Dad!”

He grinned, reached behind my ear, and pulled out a small box from thin air. He popped it open, revealing a dazzling pair of diamond earrings—though there was something strange about them I couldn’t quite pinpoint.

“Whoa... Dad, are these for me?”

A proud smile spread across his face, but it instantly contorted as a series of violent coughs racked his chest. His knees buckled, his body slowly slumping toward the floor.

I dropped beside him, shaking his shoulders in a panic, trying to pull him out of the daze. “DAD! DAD!”

“DAD!”

My hand reached out, grabbing nothing but cold night air.

Drenched in cold sweat, my fingers unconsciously grazed the earring in my lobe as the memory resurfaced like it had happened yesterday. Outside, rain pattered softly against my windowpane.

I reached through the dark for my bedside lamp, but paused. Instead, I grabbed my green hoodie dangling over my bedsheet, slipped into a pair of washed jeans hanging freely in my wardrobe, and gently clicked the door shut—careful not to wake my mom or stepdad.

My mom had remarried fast. To a tall, pot-bellied man who used sugared words around her, but behind her back, tried to corner me. I was quick-witted enough to make excuses and slip away, but when I tried telling Mom, she brushed it off as me overreacting.

My skin crawled at the memory. A single black tear slid down my cheek. I wiped it away immediately. People called my tears freakish; Mom had gone as far as calling me an abomination. So I learned to stop crying and keep my emotions under a tight lid just to pass as normal. But one thought echoed in my mind: if I wasn’t careful, my stepdad would find a way. That realization sent a chill straight down my spine.

KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK.

Three heavy knocks echoed against my spruce door. My body instinctively stiffened. Only one person knocked like that. It was late, and Mom was undoubtedly fast asleep, completely oblivious.

As the persistent knocking continued, I silently grabbed my gray backpack and began stuffing it with essentials—my writings, some snacks, a few personal items, and lastly, a framed picture from when I won the spelling bee at eight years old. Seven years ago now. Time really flies, doesn’t it?

“LOLA!”

A harsh, raspy voice snapped me back to reality.

I put on my reading glasses and slung the backpack over my shoulder. His shouts grew louder, his pounding heavier. Steeling my nerves, I grabbed the frame of my bed and dragged it across the rugged floor with a strained groan.

“I know you’re awake in there, sweetie!” His sickeningly sweet tone made my stomach turn.

I pulled with all my strength, shifting the bed aside to reveal the heavy wooden trapdoor hidden underneath. But just as the hinges exposed themselves, a sharp click echoed through the room.

Instant dread seized my chest. I froze in my tracks, breath catching in my throat as the door slowly creaked open. Framed in the doorway stood a tall, broad silhouette, blocking the hall light and plunging my room into terror.





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