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His legacy her loss

"Well that was wonderful he gave her a choice keep baby and he will raise A's his own or give to aomega wow good man "

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BlackKat07

"Need some decent editing and proofreading. Several occasions where people 'know' something beforee they should, and lots of spelling and grammar mistakes"

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