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The Devil's Vow

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Summary

A hotel that only appears at 11:59 p.m. offers Mara her dead sister back—but the demon wearing her lost lover's face demands a wedding vow first. To save Lena, Mara must enter Room 313, survive a bride who wears her face, and discover the truth: the monster isn't hunting her. It's protecting the world from what she becomes when she says yes.

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

The Bargain at Midnight

The first time Mara Vale kissed a monster, he asked her to sign the receipt.


It was 11:59 p.m. when she found him behind the locked doors of the Blackwater Hotel, barefoot on the marble floor and wearing the face of the man she had spent three years trying to forget.


Mara stopped with one hand on the master key.


“Jonah?”


The man smiled.


Not Jonah’s smile. Jonah had smiled as if happiness were something he had stolen and expected to be punished for. This smile belonged to the dark: patient, intimate, certain she would come closer.


“You know my name,” he said.


“I knew someone with your face.”


“Then we are already intimate.”


The hotel lights flickered. Behind him, the ballroom stretched farther than the building allowed, filled with tables dressed in white linen and hundreds of unlit candles.


Mara had come to shut the hotel down after a guest disappeared from Room 313. The police had found his clothes folded on the bed, his phone playing a recording of a woman whispering, Come back when you remember.


They had not found the woman.


They had not found the door.


Mara had.


It stood behind the ballroom bar, painted red, with a brass plaque that read GUESTS ONLY.


The stranger stepped aside.


“Your sister is waiting.”


Mara’s blood went cold.


“My sister died.”


“People die. Vows do not.”


The door opened by itself.


Beyond it was the bedroom from Mara’s childhood—the one her mother had boarded shut after Lena vanished. The wallpaper was still covered in blue flowers. The wardrobe still had the scratch marks on the inside.


And on the bed sat Lena, older by ten years, wearing the red dress she had been buried in.


“Mara,” she said. “You came back for me.”


Mara could not breathe.


The stranger moved close behind her. Heat touched the back of her neck.


“Do not enter,” he murmured.


“You brought me here.”


“I brought you to the choice.”


Lena looked toward the stranger. Fear crossed her face so quickly Mara almost missed it.


“Who is he?”


“Ask him.”


Mara turned.


The stranger’s eyes were silver, reflecting a room that did not exist.


“What are you?”


“Hungry.”


The answer should have frightened her. Instead, it landed somewhere lower, somewhere treacherous. His fingers brushed hers as he reached for the master key.


The contact was brief.


The effect was not.


A pulse of heat raced up Mara’s arm. She saw a different version of the hotel: blood on the chandeliers, black roses opening in the mouths of the dead, and the stranger kneeling before her with a knife pressed to his own throat.


“Marry me,” he whispered.


She snatched her hand away.


“What did you just say?”


“Not yet.”


Lena stood from the bed. “He has been waiting for you since the first time your mother opened the door.”


“My mother never opened anything.”


“She opened me.”


The bedroom door slammed shut.


The stranger caught Mara around the waist before she could reach it. His body was hard against hers, impossibly warm, his mouth close enough that she felt each word against her skin.


“If you want to live,” he said, “pretend you desire me.”


“Pretend?”


“Convince the house.”


Something heavy moved inside the wardrobe.


Mara looked at him. At the familiar face that was not familiar. At the silver eyes. At the hand still resting on her waist as if he had already claimed the right.


Then she lifted her mouth to his.


The kiss tasted of smoke, rain, and a promise she had made before she was born.


The wardrobe doors burst open.


A woman stepped out wearing Mara’s face.


She pointed at the stranger.


“Do not let him make you love him,” the woman said.


The stranger tightened his arms around Mara.


The woman smiled.


“Because he is not the monster.”


She looked at Mara.


“You are.”

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