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THE ETERNAL VS THE ASURA

Summary

In the year 2538, humanity has fallen into darkness. Violence spreads across Earth, people lose faith in the gods, and the power of the divine begins to fade. To save the world, the gods begin a 100-year Havan that may bring forth the one who can end the dark era. Six demi-gods are left behind to protect the divine palaces, but the Asuras attack under the command of the powerful Bramasura. Years later, a boy named Veer is rescued from a cruel factory and taken to the secret Grand Eternal School, where children with divine powers are trained. There, Veer forms friendships, learns powerful Astras, and enters a dangerous tournament. But the tournament becomes the beginning of a much greater war when his closest friend Kairav is revealed to be the Asura Kairavsu. As Veer grows stronger, a far greater enemy emerges: Yatana, an Asura determined to destroy the Devas and conquer the world. With friends sacrificed, kingdoms preparing for war, and ancient weapons returning, Veer must discover what it truly means to be an Eternal—and decide whether the future will be ruled by revenge or unity.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
surya
Status
8 mins ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

THE BEGINING

In 2538 , the sins on earth have reached its top everywhere on earth people beating and killing each other and women have no rights to speak for themselves.


but in this time a more dangerous thing happened people stop believing in god's they think god is useless and humans are superior beings.


This led to a decline in the power of gods like Brahma, Indra, etc. When God went to seek help from Vishnu, Vishnu told them to do a large hawan for 100 years from that hawan a child will be born that will end this era of darkness .


gods left the place and appointed 6 demi god

karuna

daya

satya

shraddha

anant

niti

to protect the palaces

as the gods leave asuras attack the palaces the commander of the asura where bramasura, a demon that got a powerful vow that he can't die on the ground means when his body touches the ground he gets revived, this vow is given by lord Shiva .


fight broke out everywhere all warriors attacking with bow and arrows and sound of sword clashes can be heard to earth . daya challenge bramasura, daya is confident that his astra would kill bramasura but daya forget bramasura has 3000 years of experience in the art bow and arrows, daya uses garud ahvaam arrow , bramasura uses agniastra arrow both arrow clashes but agniastra destroy garud ahvaam arrow and hit daya as it hit daya the days whole body went on fire and daya dies then

niti calls lord Shiva for help because niti got a vow that she can summon lord Shiva for help only 1 time then lord Shiva summon he divided the palace in half one palace in hell and one palace in heaven and said asuras and demi god to live happily then next time he will be in the action .

the demi gods decided to open a gurukul where they teach children about divine weapons and powers .


on earth , 2540

a lady , sunita was crossing the road and going to the factory for work then heard ,


a cry of a baby , in the dark alley he runs there and finds a woman surrounded with blood holding her baby in hand .


when sunita checks the lady's hand she doesn't find any marriage ring.


sunita take the baby to the factory, then a worker angry came and kicked her and said," where have you being !


she said , I found a baby on my way , the worker saw the baby and said ," baby is boy or girl".


sunita said ," it a boy"


the worker take the boy from sunita hand and give it to the master .


the master named the boy , " veer" said," next one will be neer" it turns out that he just fill the random alphabet in _eer.


then sunita stands up then his fellow lady worker asked ," why you save that boy , now he has to face this painful world" .


sunita said ," because I am late for work , if i didn't bring the boy they will beat me ".


lady said ," you are right , in this painful world, only the people on the side of that big walk are respected not the people of this side or i said lower side".


a worker shouted ," hey you don't have any work to do ".


The lady got afraid and started working quickly but then she made a mistake, she broke the glass.


the worker came forward to beat her but then a


gun shoot sounds occur


it was the master who shot the gun on the worker and said ," you little lower class people can't do a single work"


then see the lady , and said ," take her" .


she start crying kill me but please not take me to that place .


sunita seeing all this pray ," oh great prime minister of our country, give that baby a good life"


Thirteen years have passed, and Veer, along with other children, is working in a factory where they receive very little food.


Day by day, Veer and the other children grow thinner and weaker, surviving on just a bowl of thin soup four times a day.


In addition to their meager meals, they are often subjected to beatings by the master and other factory workers, sometimes for mere entertainment or because the children made a simple mistake.

Scene Shift - The Outside World


At the same time, a man entered the ruined factory where Veer once worked.

The place was completely destroyed.

An old master was lying on the ground, trembling. When he saw the man, he crawled forward and grabbed his knees.


"Prime Minister! I'm sorry! A man came here - he had some kind of magical power - he destroyed everything in a second! One of our workers, Veer, was taken by him!"


The Prime Minister frowned.

"Are you a fool? It's the year 2540. The third world war is over. I am the member of a old cult that started in 2000 by one man called god, and you're telling me magic did this?"


He turned away in disgust and said coldly,

"Kill him."


At the gate of school


Then man speaks a spell and said to veer come with me in the giant mountain


Veer step in the mountain and then she saw a big building that is like a castle and a stone Archers.


Veer looked at the man again. "Sir, what's your name?"


"I'm Karuna," he said with a calm smile.


A voice called out from outside, "Karna! Did you find someone?"


"Yes, Shraddha, come here," Karna replied.


Shraddha walked in and looked at Veer. "He seems good. Send him to his class. He'll make new friends there."


Karuna nodded. "Anant, come here and take this boy."


Anant led Veer away while Shraddha and Karna walked together through the school grounds.


Shraddha said softly, "The Eternal God's plan is working."


Karuna nodded. "Yes. He tricked the demons into believing a boy would be born to destroy them. But the truth is, he divided his power among human children - so the Eternal bloodline could live on."


Shraddha smiled faintly. "I like this life - teaching and caring for the children."


Karuna chuckled. "I never thought that behind such a serious face, there was such a kind person."


Shraddha glared. "Do you want me to teleport you straight to the demons?"


Karuna quickly waved his hands. "No, no! Sorry, sorry!


At the Classroom


Anant introduced Veer to his new classmates:


"This is Tuan - he has a twin brother named Yung.( Both are fat)

That's Johnson - he's always chewing gum."


"Johnson! Don't stick that gum on the table!" Anant shouted.


He sighed. "Anyway, Veer, meet Elizabeth - she's blind, but her defense power is incredible. Be careful around her.

That's Haru - a shy boy who loves lollipops.

This is Minho from Korea.

And here's Vihara and Kairav, both from your country - but Vihara gets angry easily, so stay alert.

Finally, this is Nika from Russia."


Anant smiled. "I'll be your teacher for this year. Let's all grow stronger together."


Later, Anant walked down the quiet hallway and entered an invisible door. Inside, five people were already seated - Karuna, Satya, Shraddha, Anant, and Niti.


Niti sighed. "Only five Eternals ( demi god)remain... all our other friends are gone."


Satya said firmly, "Don't lose hope. The new generation will rise. They'll destroy the Asuras one day. Their numbers are even greater than the armies we once led."


Shraddha nodded. "True... but they still lack experience."


Karuna clenched his fist. "Then let's give our all to train them."


next day , all the children arrived on the ground where anant teach them the art of divine weapons.


anant send them to choose the main weapon

haru chooses bow and arrows

Tuan and yuan choose gada ( mace )

Elizabeth choose a small dagger

Johnson chooses spear

minho choose sword

vihara gada

veer choose bow and arrow

nika chooses spear

kairav choose bow and arrows


anant said so those who chooses bow went to Karuna sir for training

haru , veer , kairav

karuna said these are five strong arrow mantra

then karuna taught them about 5 major arrow

agniastra ( a arrow when it hit any person the person started burning)

nag - vish( a arrow that has 5 snake poision)

vaya astra ( can summon minor storm )

neer astra ( can summon drinking water in form of rain )

chaya astra a arrow that is very sharp


karuna remind them that these arrow powers are depends how strong the user is .


kairav and veer both become very nice friends in their session of training with karuna sir .


in the night time vihara went to bully veer but veer was saved by kairav because kairav bring Shraddha sir and Shraddha sir punish vihara


on the other hand in asura palace vishak worshiping the god shiva so he can ask him not to interfere in the battle of asura and eternal but it will take 5 years .


2 year later


karuna announced that their will be the large fighting tournament to check the power and progress students made in this 2 two year .


the battle is in three part

first

1 strength

2 team work

3 brain


so make yourself ready


all students started shouting except haru


kairav invited veer to train himself whereas vihara is doing his gada practice with his friends Tuan and yuan .


haru doing the practice alone then elizabeth come near to haru and said , what in your mind why you are not you smell like a normal child are you hiding something or you are a spy asura .


haru said calmly,"oh elizabeth see you have a dagger to protect yourself and I have my bow and I can shoot you down here but I will not do that because I am not a asura now your doubt is clear by the way I know you are blind but let me wear my shirt I am feeling shame ".


Elizabeth then quietly leaves haru but then haru stops elizabeth and said you know the Zanshin ,martial arts concept where Fighters stay aware of enemies through sound, movement, breathing, and presence even without directly seeing them.


Elizabeth said yes you are very clever by the way then she leaves.


next day the match day


while school students gather to see the match after a long fight of three days students fighting each other and falling one by one

the students who were able to reach at final were


Johnson

yuan

vihara

minho

veer

kairav

nika

tuan

this 8 fighter reach the top 8 but now any one can only be the winner from here


so the match is set like this

Johnson vs nika

tuan vs vihara

kairav vs yuan

veer vs minho

on the next day

Johnson and nika face each other on the battleground nika uses her spear and attack first but johnson counter it then nika uses snake dance art of spear to defeat johnson but johnson uses the water dance art of spear both are fighting very bravely but then johnson uses fire dance art of spear and defeat the nika .

then

tuan and vihara face each other in a gada fight their gada clash with each other the fight goes hard but soon vihara defeats Tuan with his gada skills


on the next day


The Kairav vs yuan fight happened yuan with his gada went to attack kairav but kairav with a single thunder arrow shot defeat yuan.


then


veer vs minho fight happens veer uses his agniastra and defeats minho , sword master , easily.



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