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Summer Time Gone
"I loved his story, his narrative and his characters."
Beautiful Writing Style
"The style of your story was amazing. I instantly got swept up in the currents of the story, so to speak. Though you used words like 'unfathomable' and used many metaphorical phrases, it did not sound forced - instead, it built up the wonderful character known as Hailey. The only problem I can find with this story is that it is a little too confusing at times, and the end, where you 'revealed everything', was a bit disappointing. I was thinking it was going into a sort of surrealism, but instead you jerked it back to realistic fiction, which seems a bit forced and could have gone further. But I'm going to have to read this again, because your writing style is brilliant."
