Strong start.

"I'm a big fan of lore building, and there is a lot here to like. Overall the story was great and the pacing was good - since this is more history than plot, it was nice to see it moving steadily along from one point to the next. I like the idea of how the world works, even if I don't 100% understand it exactly; but that in itself is fun because something things should be left unexplained. On the technical side, I'm no expert on the use of diacritical marks, so I can't really comment on their presence in some of the words. I am curious if you use them mainly for aesthetics or because you have a language worked out where their use is mandated? The only sentence that stood out to me as missing something was this one - I think technically it works, but the later half just feels off. Could just be me. "It could be considered that Erâth represents the Universe, but in many ways is very much finite." Where were similar sentences that seemed to have an off flow. But other than a little tightening, everything was great and I really enjoyed it!"