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"When I Saw You"🥀🌹🥰

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Summary

Summary Written as a beautifully fluid, lyrical dialogue between two souls, this piece captures the delicate dance of unspoken attraction, mutual shyness, and eventual emotional confession. The narrative opens with a young woman questioning the depths of a man's feelings and challenging the unspoken boundaries of courtship, urging him to voice his love. In response, the man reveals his inner vulnerability, admitting that his hesitation stems from a profound fear of losing her and the humility of offering a simple life rather than grand palaces. Breaking past societal expectations and personal doubts, the piece resolves into a timeless, reciprocal vow of lifelong devotion, companionship, and absolute acceptance.

Genre
Romance
Author
Vikas
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

🌹English🌹

"When I Saw You"🥀🌹🥰

Is It True Love?

Am I truly so beautiful that you love me this much?

Am I truly so close to your heart

That you stop speaking mid-sentence?

If you get my companionship, will your life truly become easy?

Why do you hesitate to come close to me, tell the truth, what do you want?

My eyes that are cast down are my shyness and modesty,

My eyes are just saying that I want to be yours.

Am I truly so beautiful that you love me this much?

Am I truly so close to your heart

That you stop speaking mid-sentence?

If you get my companionship, will your life truly become easy?

Why do you hesitate to come close to me, tell the truth, what do you want?

My eyes that are cast down are my shyness and modesty,

My eyes are just saying that I want to be yours.

But you fail to understand the signal of my eyes,

If you love me so much, then why do you hesitate to speak?

Am I really beautiful that there is a place for me in your heart?

You speak up just once, confessing is done by boys, not girls, whether a boy loses his heart or a girl, it is always the boys who tell it.

So let’s walk together, making each other’s life easy.

Whenever I look at you, you mutter to yourself, why don’t you tell me anything?

After all, what secret are you hiding?

I am alone, hold my hand, let’s go somewhere far away, the two of us together.

How can I understand without words, I am a girl, you tell me something.

I understand all the hints,

But at least once, confess it yourself

That you are mine.

Yes, you are truly very beautiful, this I want to tell you.

Yes, ever since I saw you, my heart has become yours.

You are so close that I cannot even tell you.

Yes, if I get your companionship, my life will become heaven, with you my life will become even easier.

Yes, I hesitate to come close to you because I love you so much that I am never able to express it.

What your eyes are saying, I am reading it, but I am unable to express it in front of you.

I love you so much, how do I tell you this, I feel scared that before speaking, you might go far away somewhere.

Yes, you are really beautiful, I do not have a palace, but there is so much space for you in my heart that you won't even have an estimate.

How do I speak to you, how do I express it?

Yes, granted I am a boy, but it is not necessary that only I must express it.

Yes, I have lost my heart to you, but boys blush/feel shy too.

I remain lost in your thoughts, and hiding from you, I keep repeating your words.

I want to be yours, this I hide.

I am alone too, currently passing my life alone.

I just want your company.

For now, you will have to manage with hints only, without me speaking, you will have to understand my words.

You understand all the hints, then why do you remain silent too?

I am ready to confess a thousand times, but you also tell me a little

That you are mine.

Today you are standing in front of me, what is in the eyes, express it in words, understand my feelings, call me your own, if there is even a little space for me in your heart, then adopt me.

Listen, I want to say something to you, what is in the eyes, I cannot say it in words, you alone tell me how do I express my love?

I want to maintain companionship with you for lifetimes, but I feel scared that you might say no.

Why do you think of 'no' first? If you like me this much, then why don't you speak?

You just try saying it once, along with the companionship, even the world will be at your feet, this is all I want to say, I cannot stay away from you even for a moment now, if you won't speak, then I will forget the world, even though I am a girl, I will express my love to you.

Listen, I want to say one thing, you are very beautiful, really you are very beautiful.

I know you are expecting far more from me, but I do not have a palace, only a hut to live in, will you be able to spend it with me? If yes, then

I will lay down all the happiness of the world at your feet today.

I confess that I am yours, will you also stand by me? These words

I have said with a lot of fear, the heart is saying from inside, lest you say no.

You don’t know what you have said today, what happened, for which I was waiting for years.

You finally said it today, I accept, this is what I was waiting for, after all why would I reject you? The dream of years is fulfilled today.

I would want to become yours for lifetimes, just with you

I will move my life forward, I will only pray to God that I always remain close to you, will never go far, whatever you say, always

I will fulfill the promise.

Yes, I am yours and I will always remain yours, holding your hands, I will move my dreams and life forward.

No complaints from life when you are with me, now I lack nothing, just that you must never leave me.

The dream you have shown is very beautiful, just you become mine and my very life, and take my life forward.

I am yours, today I confess this.

You will never need to be disappointed with me, your companionship and my companionship will be the beginning of a beautiful life, I won't let you lack anything, and you will be the final chapter of my life, yes I am yours, only and only yours.

I also express that the dream of life which I saw,

That is finally fulfilled today, and I will always remain yours, only yours.


🌹Hindi🌹

🥰Tumko Dekha to 🥰


Kya Main Sach Me Itni Khoobsurat Hoon

Kya main sach me itni khoobsurat hoon ki tum mujhe itna chaho

Kya main sach me tumhare dil ke itne kareeb hoon

Ki tum bolte bolte ruk jao

Agar saath mile mera toh kya tumhari zindagi sach me aasaan ho jayegi

Tum mere kareeb aane se kyun ghabraate ho sach batao kya chahte ho

Meri jo aankhein jhuki hai wo meri sharmon haya hai

Meri aankhein bas yeh keh rahi hai main tumhara hona chahoohn

Kya main sach me itni khoobsurat hoon ki tum mujhe itna chaho

Kya main sach me tumhare dil ke itne kareeb hoon

Ki tum bolte bolte ruk jao

Agar saath mile mera toh kya tumhari zindagi sach me aasaan ho jayegi

Tum mere kareeb aane se kyun ghabraate ho sach batao kya chahte ho

Meri jo aankhein jhuki hai wo meri sharmon haya hai

Meri aankhein bas yeh keh rahi hai main tumhara hona chahoohn

Par tum meri aankhon ka ishaara hi samajh nahi paate

Tum mujhe itna chahte ho toh bolne se kyun ghabraate ho

Kya main waqai me khoobsurat hoon ki tumhare dil mein mere liye koi jagah hai

Tum ek baar toh bol do zaahir ladkiyan nahi ladke kiya karte hain dil ladke haare ya ladki hamesha ladke hi use bataya karte hain

Toh chalo chalte hain ek doosre ki zindagi aasaan banakar

Jab bhi main tumhein dekhti hoon tum apne aap me badbadaate ho tum mujhe koi baat kyun nahi bataate ho

Aakhir kya baat chhupaate ho

Akeli hoon main haath pakad lo door kahin chalte hain hum dono ek sang me

Main bina bole kaise samajh jaoohn main ladki hoon tum kuch toh batao

Samajhti hoon saare ishaare

Lekin ek baar khud se bhi toh kabool kar jao

Ki tum mere ho

Haan tum sach me bahut khoobsurat ho yeh main tumhein bataana chahoohn

Haan jab se tumhein dekha hai dil tumhara ho baitha hai

Kareeb toh tum itni ho ki tumhein bata na sakoon

Haan agar tumhara saath mile toh meri zindagi jannat ban jayegi tumhare saath meri zindagi aur bhi aasaan ho jayegi

Haan tumhare kareeb aane se main ghabraata hoon kyunki tumse main itna pyaar karta hoon ki kabhi bata hi nahi paata hoon

Tumhari aankhein jo bol rahi hai use main padh raha hoon lekin tumhare saamne zaahir nahi kar pa raha hoon

Main tumhein itna chahta hoon ki tumhein ye kaise bataoon darr lagta hai ki bolne se pehle tum kahin door na ho jao

Haan tum waqai me khoobsurat ho mere pas mahal toh nahi lekin dil me tumhare liye itna jagah hai ki tumhein andaaza bhi nahi hoga

Main kaise tumhein bol doohn zaahir kaise kar doohn

Haan maana main ladka hoon lekin zaroori toh nahi ki main hi zaahir karoon

Haan maine haara hai dil tum par lekin ladke bhi sharmaya karte hain

Main tumhari khayaalon me khoya rehta hoon aur tumse chhupke tumhari baaton ko bolte jaata hoon

Main tumhara hona chahta hoon yeh chhupaata hoon

Akela main bhi hoon zindagi filhaal akela beetaata hoon

Bas ek tumhara sang chahta hoon

Filhaal toh tumhein ishaaron se hi kaam chalaana hoga mere bina bole tumhein meri baaton ko samajh jaana hoga

Samajhti ho saare ishaare toh tum bhi chup rehti ho kyun bhala

Main toh hazaar baar kabool karne ke liye taiyaar hoon lekin tum bhi toh batao zara ki

Tum meri ho

Aaj tum saamne khade ho jo nazron me hai use shabdon me bayaan kar do na meri jazbaaton ko samajho na tum mujhe apna keh do na agar tumhare dil me mere liye thodi bhi jagah hai toh mujhe tum apna lo na

Suno na tumse main kuch kehna chahoohn nazron me jo hai use main shabdon me kehna paoohn tum hi batao main apne mohabbat ko kaise izhaar kar jaoohn

Saath tumhein janmo janam ka nibhaana chahoohn lekin darr lagta hai tum kahin na na kar jao

Tum pehle na kahe kyun sochte ho agar main tumhein itni pasand hoon toh tum kyun nahi bolte ho

Tum bas ek baar keh kar toh dekho saath kya duniya bhi tumhare kadmon me hogi bas yeh kehna chahoohn main tumse ek pal bhi ab door na reh paoohn tum na bologe toh main hi bhool jaongi duniya ke khilaaf main ladki hoon toh kya main tumhein mohabbat ka izhaar kar jaongi

Suno main ek baat kehna chahoohn tum bahut khoobsurat ho waqai me tum bahut khoobsurat ho

Mujhe maalum hai tum mujhse umeed kahin zyaada kar rahi ho lekin mere pas mahal nahi sirf ek jhopdi hai rehne ke liye kya tum mere sang bita paogi agar haan ho toh

Main tumhein duniya ki sabhi khushiyan tumhare kadmon me bicha doonga aaj

Main kabool karta hoon ki main tumhara hoon kya tum bhi mera saath nibhaogi yeh shabd

Maine bahut darr-darr ke kaha hai dil toh andar se bol raha hai kahin tum na toh na kaeh jaongi

Maalum nahi tumhein tumne aaj kya keh diya kya hua jiska mujhe barso se intezaar tha

Tumne aaj keh hi diya mujhe kabool hai isi ka toh intezaar tha aakhir me tumhein kyun thukraongi barso ka sapna aaj poora hua hai

Main toh janmo janam tumhara banna chaongi bas tumhare saath

Main apna zindagi aage badhaongi bhagwan se toh yehi dua karungi ki hamesha tumhare pas hi reh jaongi kabhi door nahi jaongi jaisa tum kahoge waisa hi hamesha

Main vachan nibhaongi

Haan main tumhara hoon aur main hamesha tumhara hi rahoonga tumhare haathon me haath daalkar apne sapno ko aur zindagi ko aage main badhaoonga

Zindagi se koi shikayat nahi jab tum mere pas ho toh mujhe ab kisi cheez ki kami nahi bas yehi ki tum mujhe kabhi chhodkar nahi jaana

Sapna toh tumne bahut khoobsurat dikhai hai bas tum meri aur meri hi zindagi bankar meri zindagi ko aage badhaana

Main tumhara hoon aaj main yeh kabool karta hoon

Tumhein mujhse kabhi niraash hone ki zaroorat nahi padegi tumhara saath aur mera saath ek haseen zindagi ki shuruat hoga tumhein main kisi cheez ki kami nahi hone doongi aur tum meri zindagi ka aakhri hissa hoge haan main tumhari hoon sirf aur sirf tumhari hoon

Main bhi zaahir karti hoon ki zindagi ka sapna jo dekha tha

Wah aakhir me poora hua aur main hamesha tumhari tumhari hi rahoong

🌹हिंदी🌹


क्या मैं सच में इतनी खूबसूरत हूं कि तुम मुझे इतना चाहो

क्या मैं सच में तुम्हारे दिल के इतने करीब हूं

कि तुम बोलते बोलते रुक जाओ

अगर साथ मिले मेरा तो क्या तुम्हारी जिंदगी सच में आसान हो जाएगी

तुम मेरे करीब आने से क्यों घबराते हो सच बताओ क्या चाहते हो

मेरी जो आंखें झुकी है वो मेरी शर्मों हया है

मेरी आंखें बस यह कह रही है मैं तुम्हारा होना चाहूं

क्या मैं सच में इतनी खूबसूरत हूं कि तुम मुझे इतना चाहो

क्या मैं सच में तुम्हारे दिल के इतने करीब हूं

कि तुम बोलते बोलते रुक जाओ

अगर साथ मिले मेरा तो क्या तुम्हारी जिंदगी सच में आसान हो जाएगी

तुम मेरे करीब आने से क्यों घबराते हो सच बताओ क्या चाहते हो

मेरी जो आंखें झुकी है वो मेरी शर्मों हया है

मेरी आंखें बस यह कह रही है मैं तुम्हारा होना चाहूं

पर तुम मेरी आंखों का इशारा ही समझ नहीं पाते

तुम मुझे इतना चाहते हो तो बोलने से क्यों घबराते हो

क्या मैं वाकई में खूबसूरत हूं कि तुम्हारे दिल में मेरे लिए कोई जगह है

तुम एक बार तो बोल दो जाहिर लडकियां नहीं लडके किया करते हैं दिल लडके हारे या लडकी हमेशा लडके ही उसे बताया करते हैं

तो चलो चलते हैं एक दूसरे की जिंदगी आसान बनाकर

जब भी मैं तुम्हें देखतीक् हूं तुम अपने आप में बडबडाते हो तुम मुझे कोई बात क्यों नहीं बताते हो

आखिर क्या बातछुपाते हो

अकेली हूं मैं हाथ पकड लो दूर कहीं चलते हैं हम दोनों एक सन्ग में

मैं बिना बोले कैसे समझ जाऊं मैं लडकी हूं तुम कुछ तो बताओ

समझती हूं सारे इशारे

लेकिन एक बार खुद से भी तो कबूल कर जाओ

कि तुम मेरे हो

हां तुम सच में बहुत खूबसूरत हो यह मैं तुम्हें बताना चाहूं

हां जब से तुम्हें देखा है दिल तुम्हारा हो बैठा है

करीब तो तुम इतनी हो कि तुम्हें बता ना सकूं

हां अगर तुम्हारा साथ मिले तो मेरी जिंदगी जन्नत बन जाएगी तुम्हारे साथ मेरी जिंदगी और भी आसान हो जाएगी

हां तुम्हारे करीब आने से मैं घबराता हूं क्योंकि तुमसे मैं इतना प्यार करता हूं कि कभी पता ही नहीं पाता हूं

तुम्हारी आंखें जो बोल रही है उसे मैं पढ रहा हूं लेकिन तुम्हारे सामने जाहिर नहीं कर पा रहा हूं

मैं तुम्हें इतना चाहता हूं कि तुम्हें ये कैसे बताऊं डर लगता है कि बोलने से पहले तुम कहीं दूर ना हो जाओ

हां तुम वाकई में खूबसूरत हो मेरे पास महल तो नहीं लेकिन दिल में तुम्हारे लिए इतना जगह है कि तुम्हें अंदाजा भी नहीं होगा

मैं कैसे तुम्हें बोल दूं जाहिर कैसे कर दूं

हां माना मैं लडका हूं लेकिन जरूरी तो नहीं कि मैं ही जाहिर करूं

हां मैंने हारा है दिल तुम पर लेकिन लडके भी शर्माया करते हैं

मैं तुम्हारी ख्यालों में खोया रहता हूं और तुमसे छुपके तुम्हारी बातों को बोलते जाता हूं

मैं तुम्हारा होना चाहता हूं यह छुपाता हूं

अकेला मैं भी हूं जिंदगी फिलहाल अकेला बीताता हूं

बस एक तुम्हारा सन्ग चाहता हूं

फिलहाल तो तुम्हें इशारों से ही काम चलाना होगा मेरे बिना बोले तुम्हें मेरी बातों को समझ जाना होगा

समझती हो सारे इशारे तो तुम भी चुप रहती हो क्यूं भला

मैं तो हजार बार कबूल करने के लिए तैयार हूं लेकिन तुम भी तो बताओ जरा कि

तुम मेरी हो

आज तुम सामने खडे हो जो नजरों में है उसे शब्दों में बयां कर दो ना मेरी जज्बातों को समझो ना तुम मुझे अपना कह दो ना अगर तुम्हारे दिल में मेरे लिए थोडी भी जगह है तो मुझे तुम अपना लो ना

सुनो ना तुमसे मैं कुछ कहना चाहूं नजरों में जो है उसे मैं शब्दों में कहना पाऊं तुम ही बताओ मैं अपने मोहब्बत को कैसे इजहार कर जाऊं

साथ तुम्हें जन्मो जन्म का निभाना चाहूं लेकिन डर लगता है तुम कहीं ना ना कर जाओ

तुम पहले ना कहे क्यों सोचते हो अगर मैं तुम्हें इतनी पसंद हूं तो तुम क्यों नहीं बोलते हो

तुम बस एक बार कह कर तो देखो साथ क्या दुनिया भी तुम्हारे कदमों में होगी बस यही कहना चाहूं मैं तुमसे एक पल भी अब दूर न रह पाऊं तुम ना बोलोगे तो मैं ही भूल जाऊंगी दुनिया के खिलाफ मैं लडकी हूं तो क्या मैं तुम्हें मोहब्बत का इजहार कर जाऊंगी

सुनो मैं एक बात कहना चाहूं तुम बहुत खूबसूरत हो वाकई में तुम बहुत खूबसूरत हो

मुझे मालूम है तुम मुझसे उम्मीद कहीं ज्यादा कर रही हो लेकिन मेरे पास महल नहीं सिर्फ एक झोपडी है रहने के लिए क्या तुम मेरे संग बिता पाओगी अगर हां हो तो

मैं तुम्हें दुनिया की सभी खुशियां तुम्हारे कदमों में बिछा दूंगा आज

मैं कबूल करता हूं कि मैं तुम्हारा हूं क्या तुम भी मरा साथ निभाओगी यह शब्द

मैंने बहुत डर- डर के कहा है दिल तो अंदर से बोल रहा है कहीं तुम ना तो ना कह जाओगी

मालूम नहीं तुम्हें तुमने आज क्या कह दिया क्या हुआ जिसका मुझे बरसों से इंतजार था

तुमने आज कह ही दिया मुझे कबूल है इसी का तो इंतजार था आखिर में तुम्हें क्यों ठुकराऊंगी बरसों का सपना आज पूरा हुआ है

मैं तो जन्मो जन्म तुम्हारा बनना चाहूंगी बस तुम्हारे साथ

मैं अपना जिंदगी आगे बढाऊंगी भगवान से तो यही दुआ करुंगी की हमेशा तुम्हारे पास ही रह जाऊंगी कभी दूर नहीं जाऊंगी जैसा तुम कहोगे वैसा ही हमेशा

मैं वचन निभाऊंगी

हां मैं तुम्हारा हूं और मैं हमेशा तुम्हारा ही रहूंगा तुम्हारे हाथों में हाथ डालकर अपने सपनों को और जिंदगी को आगे मैं बढाऊंगा

जिंदगी से कोई शिकायत नहीं जब तुम मेरे पास हो तो मुझे अब किसी चीज की कमी नहीं बस यही कि तुम मुझे कभी छोडकर नहीं जाना

सपना तो तुमने बहुत खूबसूरत दिखाई है बस तुम मेरी और मेरी ही जिंदगी बनकर मेरी जिंदगी को आगे बढाना

मैं तुम्हारा हूं आज मैं यह कबूल करता हूं

तुम्हें मुझसे कभी निराश होने की जरूरत नहीं पडेगी तुम्हारा साथ और मेरा साथ एक हसीन जिंदगी की शुरुआत होगा तुम्हें मैं किसी चीज की कमी नहीं होने दूंगी और तुम मेरी जिंदगी का आखिरी हिस्सा होंगे हां मैं तुम्हारी हूं सिर्फ और सिर्फ तुम्हारी हूं

मैं भी जाहिर करती हूं कि जिंदगी का सपना जो देखा था


वह आखिर में पूरा हुआ और मैं हमेशा तुम्हारी तुम्हारी ही रहूंगी



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