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"Amazing book. It’s definitely a page turner"

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"The book so far I like it."

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You & Me (Or Something Like That)

"Overall, this story was beautiful, except some parts were a little confusing, especially the last chapter, where the story jumps into a scene without introducing anything about it, but that may have something to do with the fact that there was nothing in the chapter before, at least, not that I could see. There were a few other chapters that were blank as well. One last thing that I think should be easier to understand is the last scene with Basile and Cody. For me, it seemed a little random, so I think the character's perspectives should be introduced a little earlier in the story, unless that scene was put there in order to introduce something in the future. Beautiful story, and thank you."

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You & Me

"I think this has potential to be such a great, adorable romance. It's hard to judge the plot as it's still an early work-in-progress, but I did enjoy reading it quite a bit. I think I mentioned before (in Beta Readers) that I read the whole thing sequentially; it was fluid, easy to read, and more importantly, it hooked. That said, here's my in-depth beta-review for it. Let me know if you have trouble accessing the link! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V5LraqA5rJNro9rk6KGeQHfd4UYCgQQCDic-o-FwbFE/edit?usp=sharing"

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