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Burn with the flames

"This story is a very interesting story with a beautiful plot"

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Burn with the flames

"Wow that was a great read thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Please?

"Please update!!"

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By urn with flames

"Look forward to reading more 👍🏼"

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Great

"Ok great book. Sorta crazy to fill out this questionnaire but I get it "

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Lovely Read

"It was an enjoyable read with a easy flow of plot. The characters were such a delight and their interactions were easy on the heart, well sometime. I love it. Well written book. Great job!"

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Amazing Story

"Love evry bit of this story"

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Too good

"Well written. Well edited work "

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Love me some firefighter!

"I love the premise, the style of writing and the most specially the characters. It's a refreshing read.I'm hungry for POC character. The author is weaving some of my all time favorite tropes in pne story! Love it so far!"

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worth the wait every chapter!

"the story is very good beautifully written!!! i love the plot, and the characters were so relatable!! can't wait to read the next update! I am not very keen on the correct grammar or what as long as the thought and message of the story is there, but the author is really very good in writing, i have read her other story also and she is really commendable. More power on your writing ms. author"

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Love it thus far

"I’m hooked already! Only took a few lines and I had to save it to my library. I am already a fan of your work, this is fantastic cannot wait for more! The plot quite interesting and there are lines that already have me cracking up, which for me is a bonus in any book."

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Very Promising!

"I love the plotline and her writing style. I enjoyed what I read so far."

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Engaging

"Well written story, so far. I definitely want to finish reading this! There are some confusing sentence structures which I had to reread to make sense of the wording. The word want should have been wants, the word "of" was missing, and was and he were transposed. These are 3 examples of wording issues. I hope this doesn't sound too harsh. I really like the story and enjoy your writing style and skills. Keep writing, you are definitely gifted!"

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Burn with Flames

"I really liked reading your book and I hope you upload more chapters because I would love to read more!! ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️"

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Good story

"The plot of this story was good, but the writing leaves much to be desired. A lot of grammatical mistakes distracts from the flow of the plot, writing was choppy; definitely needs to be proofread/edited better. The characters were interesting, I enjoyed Trix and Stan's interaction. Not a real satisfying ending, was hoping for something a little more uplifting, but overall an interesting premise."

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