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anger issues

"I loved the story with the Mexican Spanish background and all the tensions and all the things which makes for a teenager. I loved the way the issues of this and that the break down of relationships. But thought the difficulty was that she picked up where she left off immediately she went back to the area which is quite distressing for me she did not fight she did not have to. So was it only the area which was bad and not her?"

"Anger Issues"

"Hey Sheyanne, contrats on submitting your book for review.......you are on your way, to a world of unlimited creativity. Your story points to the sorrow that young people feel when they aren't secure in their lives. Divorces, friends dying, other friends ignoring one another........sad as we all suffer these moments that throw us off balance..........I am excited for you, this day, becoming an Author of Literature, Stories, and personal experiences. Continue to press forward. you might want to decide on which language you wish to write in, and focus on the grammar of that language to enhance your work........... ending these two chapters, with memories of the ice cream parlor, your friends, and how many things changed for the Worst, left your character with a new/old friend who returned in her life, helpful, sincere and caring. Her chance to regain sanity, less anger, could be the answer to a new and better life....with her Mother............Continue writing, you have much to share, much to give the world, not that you are an Author......... Gracias A dios Sheyanne, Mi Dios Ayuda Usted y protector Usted por siempre............william elliott"