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The Heart of the Eternal

"I loved this book, the writing flows beautifully. Characters are colourful and memorable, this is well worth the read"

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Well written

"I was under the impression that i was on an Epic adventure. Your work is just Amazing !"

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The heart of the eternal

"I loved this book. There was so much action and love it was just a joy to read. It was written beautifully."

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The heart of the eternal

"It was really good thank you"

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The Heart of the Eternal

"Bloody amazing. Absolutely bloody amazing. A long story which would probably be halved once the ‘did’ issue is resolved 🤣🤣🤣 however the story was so good and imaginatively written that I’m not as bothered as I would normally be. English is not her first language which makes the whole thing even more impressive "

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The heart of the eternal

"This story is amezing. I am already a few chapters in and i cant stop reading. This story is the most unique story ever and i cant wait to finish reading it. And i promise if you start reading it you will also be hooked right away."

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Heart of the Eternal

"Loved this book, not a thing that I would change about it. It’s the kind of book you keep coming back to read just to get back the feeling you got when you read it the first time around."

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Heart of the eternal

"I absolutely loved the pace of the book it definitely kept me up most nights I strongly encourage you to read this especially if you like polyamorous couples. The writer does a great job of explaining and switching POV"

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Ethereal , moving, breathtaking

"This has been a breathtaking story, lovely, moving, mesmerizing, there are not enough words. At times it felt as if I were watching a movie. I could not lay it down. It was a piece of literature that people could read for generations. I would love a pg 13 version so I could let the grands read it too, and they would love it too. I have been floored. Beautiful. "

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Wow just wow!

"So great and very unique! I was so sucked in almost immediately and my poor husband got stuck with our two year old because I couldn’t be pulled away literally ALL DAY!! "

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The best

"The book is amazing, I couldn't stop reading it. I've been reading books for 10 years and this is the first one I truly wanted to stop and praise. "

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💕

"Loved reading this book... thank you 💕"

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The heart of the eternal

"This book is epic. The plot, the characters and the ideas presented in this book are fascinating. I don’t agree with some of the ideas, but it has made me rethink some real life philosophies. It’s at times an uncomfortable read, but somehow it adds to the overall theme. Over all it’s very very well done. The author flips between past and present tense in an unusual manner, but that’s a very minor flaw for such a wild ride. "

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The heart of the eternal

"Great story. Can't put the book down. Thank you."

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GREATTTTT😍

"I loved everything about it and hope to see more in the future about this family."

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Wonderful story

"Wonderful story "

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I´m more than in love with this story

"This story is what introduced me to inkitt. It is very ancient yet exquisite; full of mindblowing plot development (especially the lead female character)."

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Great story!

"Love the story! It’s so fantastic and original. Very creative and well described. Couldn’t put it down."

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The heart of the eternal

"This story was so exciting! "

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The heart of the eternal

"I love this book so far! It’s refreshing having a new plot that I have never seen before. I have a little of everything and overall it’s amazing. I highly recommend reading this story "

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