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Lizzy has been running from monsters her whole life. Will she and her dad finally be safe when they move to Mars? Lizzy doesn't know much about the monsters her father calls "lunalites." All she knows is that they are after her and her dad. To try to shake them off, they move to Mars, throwing Lizzy into the strange world of the Martians she will be living with. With her new Martian friend Karrel, she slowly starts to unravel the dangerous mystery of her mother's murder and a possible conspiracy that threatens to destroy everything they hold dear...
*Update*
Hello readers! This is now an old draft of the story. The story is now called "When the Stars Cry". I'm still going to keep the old version up, so don't worry about that, but I would totally love for you to read the new version I've been cooking up. Book One is called "When the Stars Cry Book 1: A Loner, a Father, and a Madman." I hope to see you there!
-Lexi
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Lizzy Shreve-human
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virgie: Their love was beyond one's wildest dreams until our girl realizes that she needs Ronan to respect her species.
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lena: The story is well written and keeps you hooked.The blood drinking theme is a bit cringey but the characters are adorable.
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Saraa: Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?
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beverley: Absolutely loved this book. Great plot well rounded characters. A really good read.
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