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Wow and Wow

"A longer read than many on this site but we'll worth it. Loved the many plots and sub plots. And I really hope this is part of a larger series. It teaches that good guys and bad guys can be both good and evil, also that life helps us grow, even beyond our mistakes. I love the little voiceless spider woman even though I don't like spiders! "

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Wish Upon A Star

"A good story. In some of the chapters there are isdues with pronouns. Pronouns are transpose. Where you have he should be she and vise versa. Some parts there are problems with translation and gramar. All that aside it is still a good story."

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Wish apone a star

"The fact that I keep coming back to this story surprises even me! I've enjoyed the adventure probably more than I'd like to admit,so shhhhh but please keep writing, 😁 "

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Wish upon a star

"This book is amazing! It had wonderful characters, a great plot and its funny to read. Recommend!"

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Wish upon a star

"Interesting story, Follow up story should be worth reading, I like the way you integrated present issues into the story, I also liked how you stated the issues and did not belabor the point to death. Thank you."

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