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The best

"Some people are too harsh. When they judge a book they judge it like they are a writer that has published millions of books. But we’re not. We’ve read it and we’ve requested editing. But I think that this book is a good work in progress. It put pictures in my head like it should. And it was amazing to read it and then dream about it when you read a book don’t just judge it by how you feel picture yourself as the characters how do they feel? You have to look at yourself introspectively and think wow this person took the time out of their day to writers to write this I appreciate you for writing this book it was amazing and I cannot wait for many more chapters if they happen to come about please fill us in on what is inside of your mind and titled for this book thank you"

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Vampires pet

"Can’t wait to read more! "

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Trapped by the devil

"Definitely keeps you on the edge. I can't wait to read more! Please don't take forever updating 😉"

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Trapped by the devil

"This is a great story and the author keeps you on the edge of your seat wondering what will happen next. Would recommend this story to my friend's"

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Trapped by the devil

"I loved the story. I hope they finish it .i would hope my family and friends would read this book"

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Poor girl

"It is very scary, mysterious and fun at the same time I keep feeling like I'm in her shoes and I sympathize with her. "

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My opinion

"I, in my opinion, believe that this story was one of the best stories I’ve ever read on this app. It’s so hard to look away from, and your constantly anxious to see what happens next. There’s no telling what’s gonna happen, or who’s gonna what. (I’m not much of a spoiler, that’s the best possible way I could put it, even though it made little sense.), Every chapter, Your At The Edge Of your seat, and it’s almost like your in the story. Hannah Lynne, is a fantastic, talented author. You’ve no idea how good this book is, ‘til you read it yourself. I enjoy this type of book I really do, but Hannah took the plot to a whole new level of writing. I admire her as an author, and I really recommend reading this book. The characters really speak to you, even though you may not relate to what’s happened to them, you really can feel their fear, pain, etc. Hannah must have put a lot of work into this, and I don’t know how she could’ve done such a marvelous job at telling this story. I apologize if this was too long, but if I were to be honest. There is so much more I could’ve written. <3 ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜 I’m truly 😍 with this 📖, there is no way, that I’ll ever forget it. Yours truly, Kylee R."

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Good

"I liked it"

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Vampires

"Good read so far can't wait to finish"

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Trapped by the Devil

"This book is very intriguing with a lot of twists."

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My love for this book

"Yes really good papa blessed this book. kept me entertained and slightly a roused I recommend to anyone and everyone "

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Trapped

"Love the story. Was a great read and kept me interested. "

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Trapped

"The story is very intriguing and kept me wanting to read. "

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Evil vampire overlords and innocent humans

"Evil vampire overlords and innocent humans who aren't always so innocent. Erik seemed nice at the start but then fell into the evil Alpha male trope. It got kinda bipolar after a while. Suggestion to the author - Try showing the story to us than telling us the story. Sometimes it seemed like the main character was telling herself the story in first person. Good luck with your writing. "

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CANNOT STOP READING IM GOING INSANE FOR THIS BOOK

"This book is a interesting fiction-story! I lobe to read and this is the best book i have found yet!"

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Great

"Some of the grammar needs work but the plot is awesome."

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Its ok

"Its a back and forth thing it kinda gets confusing on whats going on but its a good book once u peace everything together"

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Is Andrew good ? I hope so ?? Why did they have orders to kill her family ?

"What is really going on here "

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Good to read

"I like the story the features also the style of writing .so that's all I can say & I love it. "

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