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DJBaker, former occupant of several correctional institutions.

"Took me back to not so severe a time in my life, It has a terrible touch of reality, He experienced Hell or has a vived immaduation. "

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My opinion

"I loved the writing style of this book. It expresses lots of imagery and emotion. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone looking for a good read!"

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Intriguing story

"Really enjoyed this story. I can’t wait for a second book about what happens next. The story captured my attention so that I didn’t want to stop reading until I finished it."

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Brilliant

"Awesome read ....well written , fast paced , keep up the good work Syd n keep writing. I would love to know where Cas ends up n how he will help others like him ."

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Good read

"This story line is very interesting with twists, it’s sad at times but but some sweet revenge,where this boy learns who to trust and who he thought didn’t like him but they did,it puts him to want to live"

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Amazing

"Great story telling, plot twists, and your ability to maintain anticipation is incredible. Thank you for the read and keep me posted should you continue this story to get fully published!"

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I need help! Okay so how do you guys choose these covers? They’re amazing!

"I liked it"

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I love it!

"I like your characters, your writing style and literally everything! It's so refreshing reading a not so common story. I can feel the emotions of your characters and how the world they live in pressures them. I will definitely let my friends know about your story! Thank you for your hard work! "

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In your memory ( slaves of dying book 1)

"Really good book. I couldn’t put it down. I wish you would add another ( book 2) really good job. You are very talented. "

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Amazing

"To be honest... Day's death caught me off guard 😭😭I remember reading It's all fun and games till someone dies and The forgotten and basically I was just crying thinking why he's only thirteen and so sweet he doesn't deserve all that 😭😭😭😭😭"

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This is a masterpiece!

"This story is great and i loved every second of it. It is one of the best i've read for a long time and i really recommend it!!❤"

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Skye

"This book is awesome love the plotline and character development. Keep doing you kid. "

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A "plot" of interest

"It has an interesting plot and really grabs my attention. Damn, it really makes me cry though. Killing off these great characters and reading about all the horrible things they went through....... I know he's going to die, but I really want Abel to live!!! I ship him with Cas......."

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In Your Memory (Slaves of Dying Book 1)

"I’m in awe. This is the type of book that sticks with you. Once i started reading i couldn’t stop until i got to the end, desperate to know what happens next. I can’t wait to see where it’ll take us next but i know it’ll be one hell of a ride."

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In Your Memory (Slaves of Dying Book 1)

"Amazing! I'm really hoping it updates soon, cause the anticipation if what happens next is killing me😂 this book is honestly a masterpiece. I have yet to see a plot similar to it anywhere.💞please keep up the great work author👍👍💓💕💗💞"

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Good read

"Interesting read. The world the writer creates is very foriegn, makes you think about what humanity can be capable of. "

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In your memory slaves of dying book 1

"Interesting and hard to put down "

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Wow!

"Riveting tale. Couldn't put it down. An interesting unique story of kids being replaced by parents when they misbehave. They enter a horrific prison . The boys characters are so real that you sympathize with them. An amazing tale well worth reading. "

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Blown away

"A book that brought so much emotion, the action, mystery, horror and general adventure made this book unforgettable. Love your works and look forward to more."

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Wow 😍

"LOVED IT SO MUCH!"

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