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The Hero From The Mountain
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"The Hero from the Mountain"
"Hello CynderBaby, Congratulations on your submission in the world or Authors, where you belong now.....Just a few guiding points if you will allow me............first; the Story needs to be finished. Good start Second; The Plot needs a little polishing..........but you can do that........Third; You writing, now that you are an Author, needs a bit of attention.........suggest you read your story to yourself and edit where needed, both in your writing and your grammar, spelling and punctuation...........If you're like alot of us, we think faster than we can write, which can cause some minor errors in writing your story.................overall, I like your story and where your have taken it..........keep being a writer, as you will become great one day................promise......... william Elliott"
