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Keep going!
"I love the book, I really do. But the sudden change of plot for the main character was a bit too much "
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Exposed
"In the year 2080 there are two kinds of people. The humans and those with mutated DNA. This is a story of survival for the fittest, with an ending that will leave you reeling! I hope there's a book two that picks up where this story leaves off! Kudos to the author for a fine piece of work!"
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Exposed
"An interesting plot will have to wait for more"
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Exposed is my perfect version of a dystopian scocity, I like the plot line but believe some repetitive scenes could be avoided and certain facts woven into the story instead of being told bot overall I'm excited to continue reading and see what happens next and believe most dystopian fans would find this story a breath of fresh air
"I like the world and love the idea of the different telepathy types. Some scenes or descriptions were a bit repetitive but got their point across. I would recommend thus to dystopian and teen fic fans who like a hint of romance. Keep writing and developing your style and keep up the good story ideas"
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Creative, interesting
"I found the story pretty interesting, it caught my attention and pushed me to continue reading, however I didn't like the repetition of events in the first chapters ( they were the same events eventhough they're from two perspectives). Nevertheless, this technique worked really good in the last chapters. I'll be waiting to continue reading, I hope it doesn't take you so long."
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Exposed
"Good writing style and interesting plot to keep the reader wanting more; but that's just it, you want more but the novel ends. The author uses an inventive style with the Chapter titles going back and forth between the two characters. There are some missing words and incomplete sentences."
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