Will Their Be A Next?
Let me just say, this book is very different from the others, fantasy-wise. Different in a good way. I love how the main female doesn't make the same mistake twice. It felt like she grew (in some parts) wise throughout the novel, although she does have a thing for following unreliable people. The book is complete in my thought, I feel like some people where probably mad because the main male leads feelings weren't what they wanted but if you think about it, this book doesn't feel like it was meant to be love at first sight. Love grows within time and so does your personality. And to be literal, it wasn't in the Romance category. The ending is fair, it's not too sad and not the happy cliché ending that most books have.
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I was so caught up in the story that I didn't even pay attention to the punctuation so I am assuming that there is none. Again, awesome work Kate, I hope you won't mind me calling you by what I am assuming is your first name due to your username. You earned your self a follower and I will be checking out more of your work. Also, you definitely know your vocabulary but it doesn't affect the way I read it, it's very easy to read, for the most part. BTW, love your writing style.
I give your story an overall five. There was some backstory missing but we where warned that this is apart of series which I will be heading to Wattpad after, although I don't think I have seen a loop (that sums the whole story) from the begging to the end and I am just wondering if there will be another book with Sorayi and Prince Orion.