The Unhappy Man and the Immortal Who Was Looking for Death
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The Unhappy Man and the Immortal Who Was Looking for Death

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Story Notes

This is an old draft that I may or may not revisit.

Summary

This is a true and faithful recount of the year I met the Immortal Bard in my hometown. The following story, as strange as it might be, is a faithful and true recount of what happened in this city of smoke and dust. I myself as the writer bear witness to the following events this story happened to nobody else but me and as I will later explain, to the people who happened to cross paths with me and the Immortal Bard. Many tried to record their encounter with the Minstrel in poetry and plays but I, a no writer as I am, simply intended to document this one event in my life and present it as it is.

Genre
Fantasy,Drama
Author
Feli
Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

There was a city,

Where steel towers bloom instead of flowers.

Where people knew the sun only by name,

Where hearts knew no warmth.

Where upon its people was bestowed

-- A prophecy.


There was a city,

Where an immortal once set his feet upon,

Through her alley, he waltzes,

Passing by its square he narrates,

And by the crowd, he sang–

--An elegy.


Beautiful, he was!

But indeed the city had never seen such beauty

A bewilderment they never know they don’t know,

Yet a novelty they refuse to see

And thus began the first verse of destruction.

--Prompted by vanity.


And it was too much for them.

Then they began to resent the change;

Then they began rising in anger and jealousy,

In their need of comfort, they turn to destruction.

Just as how the immortal said, just as how he sang–

--’Twas a city of tragedy.


And so the single soul was sought after

So he may be killed and peace may be restored.

Lo and behold, in their fear of destruction they destroy,

Through fear they fulfill their fall

Of the second verse ever told in the song–

--Of demise and irony


Stone to pebble, pebble to dust,

And so the single soul was sought after, to no avail

By every nook and by every cranny,

Blind they were not, but before their eyes, he was lost.

Leaving only traces of sorrow, and

Insanity.



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Chapter Notes

Hi, I'm just updating drafts that had been sitting in my PC for years.

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