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Princess Charming

"And a very charming story it is! Cannot wait for the next chapter of this girl-power take on the traditional prince meets princess in a tower, slays dragon and rides into the sunset with her. Muffin the Dragon, priceless! Well done and don't keep us in suspense for too long. Next chapter, please!"

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""...Like you said, and princess in denial." I think you mean 'a' instead of 'and' :) Hmm, in chapter 3 you seem to be switching between POV. It's easier to read if you separate point of views by scenes rather than paragraphs. Otherwise, I'm enjoying this retelling of the princess locked in a tower trope. :) Oh dear. I have to write a review longer than 200 words or it won't post. That's probably why I don't see many reviews on this site lol"

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