Charming Story

"This is a charming story about an extreme love. Even though there are a few grammatical errors that need to be edited the story moves well and is very interesting. The side stories at the end, I think, drag the story down. You would do well to make a book of short stories with them as they all can stand alone, outside of this story. Each of the side stories are very good and engaging. You are a very imaginative writer and I wish you well."