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Beyond the darkness

"Excellent read! Suspenseful and interesting. "

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So so good

"I loved this story so much! It has everything to make it a best seller EASY. I am a picky horror book reader and I must say this is a very good read, it has everything it needs to keep you on the edge of your seat and curious of what's going to happen next. Keep writing exciting stories, you are an excellent writer!"

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Intense

"Fabulous book. Really enjoyed it "

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Beyond the darkness

"This book is amazing. It can be hard to find the great books on this site. But this one is one of em. A paranormal adventure that was several twists and an good ending. Really good ending. Never saw it coming. Would recommend it for sure. "

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Beyond the darkness

"Would love to read a sequel! Could not put it down!"

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Cannot stop

"Again, I cannot stop at one chapter. I keep on telling myself: Only one more chapter.... A book is a creation of a 'Narnia' .. Somewhere you need to go to escape the busy thing called: "Life" "

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Beyond the darkness

"This book is awesome. The writer has a way of keeping you wanting to read more. I couldn't put it down and I'm so glad I read it!"

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Beyond the darkness

"Like the book it was so excited and couldn't not put in down I can wait to get the end to see what happens"

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Beyond the darkness

"Brilliantly written from the first page to the last."

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Kadero

"Enjoyed reading this book! Well written, flowed very nicely! Thank you!"

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Ratiiing

"It was amazing. Just the way it is written gives me the Chills I have always looked for in a novel. I just love it! Of course, I'll look forward to more books from you guys! Keep up!"

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Beyond the darkness

"Wow, what a story. You have unbelievable talent. You definitely must follow the path of Author. I love reading scary books they never bother me but (excuse my language) you scared the shit out of me. I had to read it during the day. Lol. You definitely have a talent, dont waist it. If you write more, please keep me updated. Your imagination is wild and I loved the twist right at the end. 10/10!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for sharing your gift."

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Awestruck

"I can't even imagine a book can captivate a person's mind like this. I know if most of you all will think, bitch that means you haven't read any good stuff yet but no. I have read a hell lot of books but no such book filled with suspense and thriller and supernatural can ever keep me so captivated that I can't wait to finish it and know what the hell happened and why???? "

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Writers Digest Review

"“Judge, 27th Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published Book Awards.” Your writing style is visual, economical, and often ends on a thrilling emotional or physical cliffhanger that keeps us wanting more. Each character in this story feels distinct with different goals. The lore you introduced of the stones and the Supreme Witch that cannot be banished gave grounding and history to the story. I loved the surprise letter from the mother at the end, after the author’s note. What an unexpected, satisfying treat for your audience!"

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Beyond the Darkness

" This was an excellent read with a plot that kept you intrigued. The characters were great and believable and it was just scary enough. I'm hoping in the future there's more to this story as the ending left unanswered questions. Great book."

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Beyond the darkness

"Excellent hoping to read more from this author soon"

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Beyond the Darkness

"I loved every minute of reading this book, kept me on edge and questioning what was going to happen next and the ending was a twist I never saw coming. Great book thanks i really enjoyed it."

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Beyond the Dark ess

"I did not put this down!!! It was a very good read!"

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I love the story

"This is an awesome piece. The writer I must confess left me spooked and on the edge through it all, I'm amazed!"

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Beyond The Darknesd

"I did enjoy this story. It flowed at the right pace without unnecessary descriptive text. The relationship aspect that Lucas had did not overshadow the main point of the story. Also it was refreshing to read a story without the use of profanity proving that a potential best seller has the class to rise above this. Would reccomend to anyone. P.S. Readers would like to know of a definite sequel before reading a story as this, as the ending leaves possibilities. No games."

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