Almost there

"I thought that it was an interesting story, but it needed more. I'm not clear on Josh's relationship with his mom or his uncle. Why does he hate him? What's his problem with his mom? Is there a dad? Just detail stuff. Also, it seemed like you jumped from place to place a lot. There was no setting and little to no description of the characters. I think that would add a lot more emotion to what was happening. Good work. Keep writing!"