Wished

Alexa Reyes

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Jan 24, 2018

Please improve on the charaters

"I liked it overall but there was a few things you should improve on. Like, introducing the charaters. We didn't know who they were when we first started reading. But I loved how the names where different. Will there be more? I hope so because you left it on a cliff hanger. Lol CD other then that I am in love with this novel, and I can't wait to hear more about the characters xoxo"

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xXRoseXx

0 chapters read

Jan 24, 2018

Wished Review I love this novel so far

"I think that you have great potential. Jeep up the good work! And congrats on your first story! I'm am very excited to see where this story will lead, and I wonder what the accident is.. I thinkvothers will enjoy this story, I'm wondering what you have going on behind just her story.. maybe a couple plot twists?? I can't wait to hear more about Amber's past and what makes her so special. Also, I'm hoping we get to see more of Ethan, maybe he is the antagonist?? I hope you update this o . A regular basis, and that others find your story as entertaining as I did. Again, keep up the good work! Sinserally, rose. A reviewer of new stories "

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