What is your opinion?
ditch
"the story structure is a bit confusing but it's otherwise interesting"
Ditch
"Ditch is an interesting story. I know that's lame and generic but there isn't much else to say. The author has a unique writing style that cucks readers into the story. I didn't see much going on plotwise but I only read five chapters so that could factor in. I did notice two grammar errors in the last chapter I read. The text that was italicized was inadequately spaced so it affected legibility. Other than that, it's a great story."
Keep going
"Cannot say i didnt enjoy it because its so fresh and. New, like your writing style the strong female lead. Keep going x"
A work in progress
"I think this book has a great concept going. I like the female lead, and what this book is representing. However, I think that the overall flow of the book needs to be improved. Weird word choices and phrases make the story awkward and hard to understand."
A little messy
"I like how the plot firmly puts a strong, independent girl in her own place instead of having weak characters. But there are some parts of your book which are just a little confusing/messy for me. Like for the sound effects, maybe you could put it in italics and have the description behind it instead of going into another paragraph. I also noticed a few errors here and there. But criticism aside, I actually look forward on how you develop the book as I can see strong characters that you have put in the book. II hope i can see it grow :) Keep up the good work"
