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Pam Caldwell

"This story is far from over.. I need to know what happened to Matt since he didnt get his phone? Matt and Leo's life is truly of today's experience our young men go through at such a young age. To give a full review is hard since it only went to chapter 2 and yet I am left with so many questions. What I have read so far left me wanting to know more. The writer has an excellent talent expressing the emotions of their characters. I really enjoyed the story so far I want more.."

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"Intrigued to find out how the plot ties back to the first chapter teaser. I liked the author's writing style, kept my interest. Definitely looking forward to reading more chapters to see how the characters are expanded and how the story unfolds and explains what was written in chapter 1"

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Ann Playter

"This story started off with a bang! I like the way it captures your attention with the death scene then went into the beginning of the story of how it happened. I am looking forward to reading more from this writer.."

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