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Lilly

"If you cry like a baby reading an emotional book....try and take your time with this one. It will make you cry, as its sad how a child is tossed around by the system her whole childhood. I truly loved the silverlining that was her telepathic ability to communicate wildlife. The story, despite being so sad and unfortunately true in alot of aspects, was a marvelous read and i thank the author for it. So thank you for sharing!"

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unexpected emotions

"this book was so hard to pause and carry on with life while reading it. A complete emotional rollercoaster. This was such a great read. "

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Lily

"Excellent read! Fast paced and gripping. Just one thing-the word is dragged, people. NOT drug!"

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Lilly love

"This was a fantastic book. I love lilly and all she was able to overcome. You did a great job"

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Lily

"This book was easy reading. The story flowed and kept you interested. Although not a great novel, it was one of those that give you warmth inside. Lily’s adventures make you wonder what you have done in her position. Her strength is something all youngsters should aspire to"

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Lilly

"A beautiful story. Heart stopping, agonising, hard, but beautiful nonetheless. Good plot and grammar, there are some story aspects that should have been tackled some more (like sudden stop of pursuit, even though her secret was out - kinda not likely in real circumstances; or what of her gift after she woke up...), but overall interesting and captivating to the point of "can't put it down until completed reading". Good job author, thanks for sharing."

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Lilly

"There were a few grammar errors here and there, but overall, great story. It made me feel like I was in the book."

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Lilly

"This was such a great story!"

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Beautiful!

"I love the plot and how the main character never stoped fighting an uphill battle! I am in love with the plot, it’s an amazing story!"

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Lilly

"For Heaven's sake, someone please publish this book. It's simply amazing 😊"

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Chapters typos

" The words are spelled wrong, I didn't get the plot of the story and overall this was good"

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Great book!!!

"This book was/is amazing. First book I'd ever write a review for cos I just love it too much. Great work, really. The author is just brilliant "

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Best one yet!

"My favorite book of the author so far! Loved it! A must read! "

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Lilly

"Excellent. Writer draws the reader in and paints the story such that you are "there". Great Sci-Fi novel. Thoroughly enjoyed."

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Lilly

"Great writing author! A lot of emotions were explored. Captivating plot. Worth reading! "

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Lilly

"Office and they said that because by b be easier to do the money 💰 Judy and they are walking around in my car and I don't have any chance to get to know what the dispensary on go look like this phone was going through I'll stop and they are not much of charger and they don't have to be there at all your help and satisfied with your door opener and satisfied with your mom what time is good morning grandma is going well with you and your help and they are walking to you. Fun fun fun I love to see you guys soon. SO just let me know what time I should get off work at 6 tomorrow and they will get back together v "

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Roller coaster plot, and lovable characters. Awesome!

"I loved the story! Great plot, relatable characters, and lots of action! "

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Lilly

"Its a great book. Nice writing style. Not boring moment."

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Lily

" I like the character of lily she is so strong and this story of her life is so motivational to every teenager "

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Lily

"I don't read feel good. I know it is under sci-fi but this IS feel good. I love it. If it had a crap plot i wouldn't read it; i do not read novels with less than 500 pages,but this takes the cake. This is better that "Harry Potter" and i have 2 complete sets and no children So that is saying something. Little grammer and spelling error but that is trumped by the plot. You should make money off this"

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