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I find it Funny title is optiona

"This was a great story. I think writing it from Snape's p.o.v. was perfect. Your grammar and writing style were a pleasure to read. CosmykAngel"

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8thweasleykid

"Loved it! It was much shorter then the stories I usually read but I always enjoy a good Sev/ Hermione fic."

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Loved it!

"I think you have great voice in your writing, and I liked just how in depth you got into the thoughts of Snape as he started to lower his walls for Hermione. The only issue I found is that I found their relationship a little too sped up. From my understanding the story's time span is, at the most, a week? I think it's a little fast for them to be so in love BUT I still thought it was adorable. Great job, and keep up the good work(:"

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Snape is 50/Hermione is 20

"Ok so. I love the whole love story thing but have you guys ever realized Snape is like 30-40 years old than Hermione?! I mean seriously."

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