Interesting idea

"I really enjoyed this fic, I thought it was a good idea tackled pretty well. Hermione's logic was ... interesting ... I certainly would never have thought of that. The story flowed pretty well and the characters felt real. My main criticism would be the length--the story was pretty long for a single chapter, it could put people off, and I would suggest splitting into several shorter chapters. I very nearly didn't read it because of the length, but I'm very glad I did. It ended well and would make an excellent start to a longer story if you decided, or stand strong as it is. Very nice effort."