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Love

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Summary

Let this be what you want it to be.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.6 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Why do you have to be like this?

One moment you're nice,

Then you make me so sick.

My confidence in you has been surreal.

My staunchness to you has been addicting like a vicodin pill.

I conferred my soul to you,

I embraced you with titter.

Elated was I in your arms,

But now, my heart is ever so bitter.

We had an conformity;

I treat you grand and you make me jubilant.

But you equivocated and paltered my mind.

I'm just so dejected inside.

Then you scurried away, like everything is superb.

Bellowing in the shadows,

While I'm weeping outside on the curb.

Forgiveness will never come.

A grudge will I hold against you.

You're an distant hallucination,

To be imagined never again.

Why do you have to be like this?

I thought you were my friend...?

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