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True Reality

"This author has hit the nail on the coffin.. Their words just speak to you in so many ways on the various relationships we encounter as we journey through life. I would love to read more even a book of their poetry. This is a modern spin on Maya Angelou's boldness when she expressed herself. Just awesome.."

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Heartbreak

"This author clearly understands the way a person feels when the relationship is one sided. I can definately relate to this poem.. It goes for both gender ..Love it!!! .5 stars deserving.. I would like to read more from this author."

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Bittersweet

"An accurate portrayal of affections felt so strongly on one side yet carelessly on the other. I went into this cheerful and left quite disheartened. This is truly a nice, brief piece of work I think many can relate to! If you're looking for a poem about the bitter side of false love, this is it."

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My Review

"Doesn't really have a plot lol. But love how you used such fancy words but still kept it pretty simple! Keep up the good work :) "

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Raw and Emotional

"The author has expressed a wide variety of emotions and clearly shows how the relationship has changed. Feeling of disillusionment and hurt would accurately describle the author's feelings at the end of the relationship and the reader clearly can tell how devastated and angry the author is by the treatment by the other person"

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