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What is your opinion?
First Poem Review
"Overall, the first poem of your collection is good. I like the theme and I like the language that you've used, particularly the repetition. It's short and sweet and it's a good start. I would say that to improve, I'd get rid of some of the punctuation at the end of every line as it prevents the poem from flowing as easily as it could. Other than that, I think you've done a good job. Well done!"
My Review
"Your intention is quite good, and so is your idea. If you want to reach many readers you have to review the way you write. I found the text a mess, all unordered. Make a good text formatting."
