What is your opinion?
Creepy
"By holding back information and slowly releasing it, the author keeps you drawn in throughout each chapter. Personally, I liked the chapter lengths themselves. It made it very easy to read. As for the story itself, I found it very enjoyable...and creepy. The idea of the persona possessing Amanda is very chilling, although I wasn't sure that was what was happening at first. I'd like to know more about why they were at the old shack and what Amanda's home life was like, so I hope that the author posts more. Besides some spelling and grammatical errors, it was very enjoyable. Good work!"
Well written and compelling
"Great job WonderingHonestly, I really enjoyed your work. Great story--the telling and the style. You really painted scenes well; I was able to see your story in my mind's eye. I won't be going to the cellar for a month. Also, I know an Alice, and now I won't ever be able to look at them the same way either. Thanks!"
