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What is your opinion?
Minimalist, Beautiful
"Paints warm, cozy scenes that drew me in and made me want to stop and rest awhile. Very minimalist, yet flowing language. Really nice work! I would love a whole poetry book of these, they are very human and touching."
Affects Every Sense
"The story is very simple and easy to imagine in all senses. It takes a minute to read. The story's warmth should make a reader smile. There is no punctuation at all, so I think that should be looked at. Added punctuation will most likely create an even more effective message."
