What is your opinion?
Fortune cookies
"Well It is true, explorer is the worse web browser out there. It f*ck up inkitt, it ruined tumblr and I can't fight for my country because of this browser. You suck, bowser. Go back to Nintendo. Maybe you can build up the joke on panda express at the start. Or give a half-ass explanation of what panda express is since stories goes out to international waters. Did you know that fortune cookies did not originate from china but in boston...or is it california? I am not typing in that binary to find out if it really means "haha made you look it up" why inkitt don't you support cut and paste? Nokias are so indestructible, they put diamonds to shame. Gen 1 Nokia phone > plain old diamond Fortune cookies really are delicious. I ate four in a row and was told I was going to be a duck at one point. Just kidding, I forgot. Since you wrote this in second person perspective, maybe you can make us feel more for the dinner. What does the food taste like instead of just some vegetables. Be more vivid in the minor things that I would do in the story. You wait for your computer and internet to finally work again, praying that it doesn't suddenly dubstep on it's own. You bite into the egg rolls and something cracked under your teeth, you hope it was the salt... And also fortune cookies were made from a japanese recipe. Imagine how many lies and minds this cookie has blown I'm going to stop rambling now I have school to go to. Did I mention I was ADD? GoodBye"
Did NOT expect that!
"After reading your book I would have thought that maybe this note would take your character on an adventure.Clearly I was wrong... Would you mind putting an addition to your book as it has true potential although it is a little short.By expanding the plot,eventually one day,you can use your book to enter a competition and get it published ,or something close to that...Good luck!"
