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Fearing The Mafia

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Summary

enjoy!

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.3 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

She was like a storm

Like to sea in fury he longed to claim

But she was a little kitten purring there too

He promised himself to break her

She promised herself too not to break

Like a bamboo she stood,bending but never breaking

Failing,he decided to claim her

And ended up falling in love,with the feisty sea

His feisty sea

She too,couldn’t help herself ,feeling the same

But,

After the truth she discovered

She wasn’t so sure

Should she do what her mind said

Or follow her minds path

His mind was confused too

She betrayed him,but wasn’t that obvious ?

For all the wrong things he had done to her

For all the pain he had caused to her

Had he not deserved it?

But again,he thought she had loved him...

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Funny

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Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

3

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

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Profound

Heartwarming

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Heartwarming

Shocking

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Shocking

Good Writing

2

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

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Compelling Plot

Great Character

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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author

Your story truly caught my attention.
The way you write is compelling and impactful I’d be interested in exploring more of your work. How long have you been writing? I’m asking with something in mind and would love to explain when you're ready.

a year
author

exciting!

4 months
author

story seems to be exciting

4 months

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