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What is your opinion?
Visitor
"Such a chilling ghost story."
Mysterious
"U shud write more"
As a writer yoy must write in the first person to engage your audience
"Please you need to write in the first person to engage your readers, the reader must see and experience everything through the eyes of the key character, e.g "you look tired today " gramm heard her say snapping his head up to look at her. So instantly your reader becomes gramm, it's not I snapped my head up"
