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709

"Loved it! Loved the depth of thought that went into this piece. I loved my mind getting twisted around the time loop phenomenon. I even wondered if there was some way to buy a second machine and feed it to the first. This story was so much fun. Made my day. Want more!"

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709

"An enjoyable and thought-provoking story. The inventive application of time travel is fun to contemplate and the middle twist was a clever lateral thought. I would recommend this to anyone into time travel or the space time continuum supposedly used by UFOs. 😉🤔"

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Time travel Paradox, kitchen appliance style

"If you like talking about time travel with your friends, this is something that you will like. It's funny, it's sci-fi and well done. I found it pleasing from beginning to end. As I am new to writing and am an impatient reader this should speak to you. I hope the author produces more."

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