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THE best I've read on Inkitt!
"Mike, you have a fabulous command of the English language! It was such a joy to see the way you handled descriptions. Personally I found the story a tad slow in some places, too much emphasis on getting high, but overall it is a great story. Your handling of the sex scenes impressed me greatly. Before you attempt to get this professionally published, do go over it again. You have a few places where quotation marks are misused. Editing is never something to rush. If you find yourself getting lost in the story and not looking at the grammar objectively, then it's time to stop editing and put it away for a few hours. What I usually do is go back to the last sentence I remember actually editing and highlight it with color than close the file until I can focus again on the mechanics. Without a doubt this was the most PROFESSIONAL story I've read on Inkitt. I'll look with joy for the announcement of the published final draft!"
Sue's review
"I enjoy the 70s references! Also, really appreciate the author's descriptive writing ability and the intrigue with the sub plots. "
