What is your opinion?
Hands in pettakere cave
"It's pretty good pull's me in that's what I like to see in books "
Well done
"I really enjoyed how you subtly demonstrated how each person could potentially infect the next. Very well done!"
caseycuervo
"I love the premise of this story and I hope you've started to expand on it. I can't wait to see where you take this and how it will develope and conclude. Also curious to see if "Stephanie" is featured in the rest of the story. 5-Stars all the way with the exception of punctuation/grammar. There were no hiccups that I could see, but I know how much you dislike proof reading which does sometimes leads to little mistakes. Never stop writing!"
Love you writing style as always.
"So I finally decided to read this after seeing your updates on you ff.net page, which I periodically check for updates on your works. I love all your GW stories so I was interested to see how you would write something different and I have to say it's really good - though I expected it to be since I love your writing style! It took me awhile to catch on and it also reminded me of a lot of virus spreading movies, like Contagion I think it was. Its so crazy to think though how something so simple could easily spread a virus like the one you created or even others. But anyway, I felt this was detailed and the characters relatable and real. You obviously did some research on your material because it doesn't feel made up or fake. There was only one grammar error I noticed, and it was a sentence somewhere in the middle. I really liked the flow and thought it was interesting the way it started with one character, and as soon as that character 'left the scene' it would follow to another and connected them all. Anyway, this was really good and if there is more to this story I'd be excited to read it, just as I am your GW fics!"
Where's the rest?
"I liked the basic idea and how all the characters are linked in different ways. It feels like the beginning of something much bigger. What I did find a little confusing and a little off putting was that you used first person POV for every character. It worked at points and not at other points and sort of at different points again. I did some reading up on using multiple first person POV structure and one of the points mentioned was that your characters need to be very distinctive so as to easily differentiate them. All I'm saying is it's not quite there but heading in the right direction from my readings point of view. Another point is that you occasionally use a wordy word where a simpler word would work much better as the "flow" of words would just read nicer. Enjoyable, snappy, fun and I'd like to read more."
Wow!
"I was planning on doing some light reading last night before going to bed when I saw this fic. I've been following your GWing fics since the previous year and it was always a treat to read them, so I was intrigued when I saw the summary of this particular story. And I'm truly glad I acted on my curiousity! The build-up is one of the things I loved in this chapter. Each part made you want to know more about what'll happen next in the story. It was also easy to relate to the characters and their emotions to the point it made me sad that most of them won't be appearing (or even mentioned) in the rest of the story. It's also very realistic! I can definitely imagine this happening in real life especially with the way things are these days. It was a thoroughly enjoyable read and I just can't wait for the next chapters! Thank you so much for sharing this gem with us!"
