What is your opinion?
Complex
"You were not joking in your blurb when you stated it is nigh impossible to explain something this complex, Without spoiling for future readers you executed the various characters very well including fleshing out their personalities that most writers tend to neglect. It was honestly a breath of fresh air to see a third person narrative for a fantasy novel. I have grown weary of these first person narratives it has been leading a bad taste in my mouth. There were a few very minor sentence structure mishaps which I included in the feedback portion ( Though inkitt software seems to not be working on it let me know if you get anything via email.). The plot itself felt riveting but not something that stood out to me. (to another person it may so dont take my opinion to heart). I enjoyed your writing style, it was fluid and complimented the scene setting and dialogues effectively. ( Though a few instances of when they were talking out loud felt too much like exposition but that is just a minor thing). All in all I tip my hat off to you. Great work! Cheers!"
A Nightjar's Whisper
"What most caught my attention in its history is the way in which the characters show us a very real life style that we can easily perceive."
review
"Your writing is clean and good. Your story is also very intriguing. Good Job! Can you also read and review my story as well. It is called "No Suicide," and it's a self-therapy book on mental health. Here is the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/other/206505"
Captivating Read
"Really enjoyed the first chapters of A Nightjar's Whisper and I can't wait for the author to continue with the book!"
