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Jade

"I love apocalyptic stories. Jade and April were total opposites but learned how to get along to accomplish their destinations. I want the 2nd book out soon cause I wanna see if Jade and Cindy find their island. Hope they get to see April alive on this heavenly island they are seeking"

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Gone World

"I agree with the other reviews. This is one of the best written end-time adventures I've ever read The characters are richly drawn. The plot is absorbing. Christians will find subtle messages and happy endings This is a gripping thriller and I can't ask for better or wait for more! "

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Gone world

"I was captivated from the first sentence. I can't wait to read the next one. Please tell me if or when it comes out!!!"

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Fantastic book!

"I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was well written, and kept my attention the entire time. I can't wait to see what comes next!"

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Gone World

"Great story, intriguing plot, lots of twists. I liked it very much. The characters were consistent and realistic. The ending was perfect. Altogether, it was excellent. The manuscript could use a thorough proofreading and spell check, but that is always the final and most boring steps! I think Gone World should be published. I look forward to reading other books with your name on them."

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Great story

"Great story so far. Now, may I continue? Thank you."

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Slow moving story

"I wish the sorry moved a bit faster "

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Loved it

"That says it all. Loved the story from start to finish. Was I sad by some of the things that happened along the way.. definitely. Did I see it coming no not always. The story was well told and honestly it was hard to put the book down. I thoroughly enjoyed the tale. I did not see any errors or major mistakes. The words just flowed. I can't wait to read the next story about the trip to the island or the island itself. I certainly hope it is in the making. Waiting not so patiently. LOL Thanks for a great read."

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Couldn't put it down

"Can't wait for the rest"

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Gone world

"Probably one of the best post apocalyptic books I have ever read. Great story line. Awesome twist on the end of the world. The characters were very easy to love. Your book really took me in and let me get lost in their lives. Amazing job and I really hope you make a book 2. "

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Gone World

"FANTASTIC Book!!! I enjoyed reading this book very much. I was hooked from the beginning. I could not stop reading until the end. This book is well thought out and the plotline is so well written that I must admit it brought some intense emotions out. I loved the characters and they are definitely memorable. I definitely am looking forward to the next book to this series. Thank You for a most excellent book."

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Gone world

"This is one of the great books i red"

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Brilliant book

"Cant wait to read the rest of this book"

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GET THIS BOOK PUBLISHED!!

"Wow, its quite impressive to find a book, in which u don't find a single boring scene. I really love this book and I hope it gets published."

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Gone world

"I want april back 😢 Best I read in a while 👌👌👌"

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Gone World

"I liked this book because the story line was amazing and you never got to any boring scenes. I would recommend this book ti everyone i know because it was so amazing. I rated this 5 stars because that is what it deserved i could tell how much work they put in."

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Laurens review

"Wow. I have been reading this book for some time now. I finally finished. this book has changed me. I got really sad when April died because I thought I would hate the story after but I didn't. Overall I think the plot is okay but I was hoping April would come back. But I'm kind of happy because the world is coming back. Take my advice please get this published and make a book two. you are an amazing writer!"

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Gone World

"Beautiful."

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Fun read

"I thought this would be just another end of the world book, but the way the author introduces new characters and keeps me guessing at every corner, makesthis a great read. Keep up the great work "

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Good one.. Ending is still required..

"Nice book overall. Even though it hadn't ended and we are still awaiting the ending, it is so eventful to the end. "

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