What is your opinion?
Claimed by the badboy
"I don't have anything bad to say about the book. I love the story and the characters "
It's a good
"I like way the story is wrtten from several viewpoints. The plot is good and it is not the typical romance. There is depth to the story. "
story
"It is really nice. The only criticism is that it would be wise to double check and see what you wrote so that it is not confusing. But again the story was really good."
Entertaining
"I think the ploys is interesting but it could have been mor devolped.Other than that the only thing is translating with translaters online is different from what an actual native speaker would say.The author did a good writing the story."
Interesting
"This is the first story I've found on this site that a.) Is written entirely in present tense b.) Includes vocabulary of another language While I cannot help you on any errors on the Spanish (or is it another language?) used - as I did not take Spanish - I can tell you that there are a few small grammatical issues. For one, I found that the mother was mentioned many times as a 'he' in the first chapter, which confused me. There are minor spelling errors - very small at that - throughout. I found the plot-line very unique and interesting, even considering I mostly only enjoy thing with excessive action. Congrats on getting this far, I'm surprised this isn't more popular!"
