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What is your opinion?
Concept Hooked
"I love the concept of the story. The blurb is very strong and clever. It honestly made me want to know how all of this is going to turn out. I also noticed a few typos in your story which are easy to fix. I look forward to the following chapters as this story develops."
Promising Start!
"What first drew me to this story was the blurb - it really was a good summary that made me curious to read the first chapter. Apart from a couple of typos, which are only natural, I found the grammar pretty good. That's something I really look for in a book, because bad grammar (like run-on sentences) are a dead-breaker for me. Anyway, enticing first chapter - I have to say! I liked the cliffhanger and am now waiting to find out why Lilith was climbing the window! :)"
